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I just wrote the essay a few minutes before. I don't know the pros and cons by checking myself. Could you please check the essay for me? I have seen your correction of others on the bulletin.
The essay is below.
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A good friend
A good friend is like a cup of ice tea, which can calm down your restless mind. A good friend is like an eraser, which can erase your upset. A good friend is like a motto, which can direct you towards peak. A good friend is like a shadow along with you silently whenever you think of him/her. A real good friend can encourage you and give you positive suggestions, but the opposite is gradually destroying your ambition. In other words, to have a good friend is really an important matter.
You can share your ups and downs with your friends. You can express your opinions about any topics without any restrictions with your friends. You may feel peace and carefree with your friends. All matters you have soon became a part of life.
To sum up, it's such a significant lesson of life to have some close and good friends. Although, "Birds of a feather flock together," you still have to watch out carefully.