The Most Important Person in My Life

The Most Important Person in My Life

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 1:26 pm

The most important person in my life is my father. He is very important to me because he raised me for 25 years. He let me go to school and have good life. I always had a roof over my head and food on the table. He always makes me laugh and feel happy. When I had some problems, he would give me good advice. My father is a kind man. He likes to help people so he has lots of friends. Father is a excellent person so he is a popular teacher in his school. My father has good values. He taught me how to be a good person. My father always will be my best friend. I hope he is able to have health and happiness forever.
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Re: The Most Important Person in My Life

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 1:26 pm

The most important person in my life is my father. He is very important to me because he raised me for 25 years.

> He let me go to school and have good life.

He let me go to school 中式英文。整句的英文意思會變成他"允許"你去上學,你上學要自己先跟他講,經過他同意,然後才可以上學。後面的也是,要經過他"允許"你才能有good life.

英文上(西方社會)在表達感激時較少把重點放在"學校上",直接講good life即可,因為上學是good life之一。一個講法是I have a good life because of him. 或是 Because of him, I have a good life.

若還是要提學校: Because of him, I am able to go to school and have a good life.

>I always had a roof over my head and food on the table.

have。had是過去式,表示以前有,現在沒了。

He always makes me laugh and feel happy.

> When I had some problems, he would give me good advice.

have。理由同上。would可以保留,表示委婉語氣,時態上仍是現在式。

> Father is a excellent person so he is a popular teacher in his school.

is an excellent...

> I hope he is able to have health and happiness forever.

have good health.
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