Cingjing Veterans Farm

Cingjing Veterans Farm

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:36 pm

If there is a paradise in Taiwan, that must be Cingjing Veterans Farm. She hide herself at the Jen-Ai Town of Nan-Tou County in Central Taiwan. Cingjing farm is famous for beautiful scenes, Sheep Shearing Show, and characteristic homestays. In the autumn, you will see the most graceful and romantic looks of Cingjing farm.

Passing native forests, through towering gorges, you can immerse yourself in the fresh air and the scenic wild greenery of the Cingjing Farm, Cingjing Farm is surrounded by notional park and hot spots. In the autumn, the best scenic spot is Aowanda. You can take a walk through the romantic view of autumn maple. You also can enjoy the graceful sight of Meng-gu Waterfall and Emerald Lake.

Cingjing Farm is one of the most popular farms in Taiwan. Every weekend, there will hold a interesting Sheep Shearing Show. The host is Mr. Grand from New Zealand, along with the assistant, his wife Mrs. Grand, who is a Taiwanese, will bring the audience their marvelous performance with the cute sheep.
The show begins with the "sheep herding". Mr. Grand commands his two sheepdog with whistle. And impressively, the sheep will be punched into their fence in a very short time. Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience down there to be the sheepherder. She/he will classify the sheep in to three groups. Finally, Mr. Grand will give you his master-stroke -- the sheep shearing show. During the show, Mrs. Grand will translate for him. Their talk are very humorous. And the Innocent look and comical posture of sheep will definitely make you laugh!

There are many characteristic homestays in Cingjing Farm, Every homestay vie with each other for glamor. Cloud's Hometown has the most fantastic view of all homestays, as its name. The VIP room has three French windows, so you can appreciate the ancient forest, profound gorge, mirrorlike Emerald Lake without any blind spot. When you are bathing, you don't need to worry about any interference and peep with opening French window. You are just surrounded with natural. You can totally enjoy yourself with the fusion of human and natural.

The scenery of Cingjing Veterans Farm changes throughout the four seasons. In addition, different temperate flowers and fruits are grown there as well. If you visit Cingjing Veterans Farm is different season, you will highly praise the miracle of natural.
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Re: Cingjing Veterans Farm

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:36 pm

Very nice. :)

P1. She [hides] herself...

P3.
1. there will hold [an] interesting...
2. ...be punched into their fence in a very short time.
以下是建議
punch: (Western US) to herd 這用法較少,較容易讓人會錯意。也許找其它的herd的同意字較好

into their fence -> into the/their pen 除非into their fence是術語,不然很容易會錯意

3. She/he will classify the sheep [into] three groups.

P4.
1. ...[mirror-like] Emerald Lake without any
2 You are just surrounded [by the nature].
3. ...with the fusion of human and [nature].

P5.
1. If you visit Cingjing Veterans Farm [in different seasons], you will highly praise the miracle of [nature].
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:36 pm

thanks a lot for your help
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:36 pm

Cingjing Veterans Farm

If there is a paradise in Taiwan, that must be Cingjing Veterans Farm. She hides herself at the Jen-Ai Town of Nan-Tou County in Central Taiwan. Cingjing farm is famous for the beautiful scenery, the Sheep Shearing Show, and characteristic home-stays. Autumn is the best time to see the most graceful and romantic looks of Cingjing farm.

Passing native forests, through towering gorges, you can wrap yourself in the fresh air and the scenic wild greenery of the Cingjing Farm. Cingjing Farm is surrounded by notional park and hot spots. In the autumn, the best scenic spot is Aowanda Forest Recreational Park. With the arrival of autumn, maple leaves turn red and flutter in the air. During this time, Aowanda will have another name - “home of Taiwan maples”. While taking a walk through the path between autumn maples, you can image that you are walking into the scenery of the romance movie, such as The Autumn in New York. You also can enjoy the graceful sight of Meng-Gu Waterfall and Emerald Lake.

Cingjing Farm is one of the most popular farms in Taiwan. Every weekend, the people there will hold an interesting Sheep Shearing Show. The host is Mr. Grand from New Zealand, along with the assistant, his wife Mrs. Grand, who is a Taiwanese, will bring the audience their marvelous program with the cute sheep. The show begins with the "sheep herding". Mr. Grand commands his two sheepdogs with a whistle. And impressively, the sheep will be herded into their fence by jumping in a very short time. Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience down to be the sheepherder. She/he will classify the sheep into three groups. Finally, Mr. Grand will give you his master-stroke -- the sheep shearing show. During the show, Mrs. Grand will translate for him. Their presentation is very humorous. And the innocent look and the comical posture of the sheep will definitely make you laugh!

There are many characteristic home-stays in Cingjing Farm, Every home-stay vie with each other for glamour. Cloud's Hometown has the most fantastic view of all home-stays. The VIP room has three French windows, so you can appreciate the ancient forest, deep gorge, mirror-like Emerald Lake without any blind spot. While taking a bath and look outside the window, the indistinct vision behind the fog will let you feel that you are the angel living in the “Cloud's Hometown”. You are just surrounded by the nature. You can totally enjoy yourself with the fusion of human and nature.


The scenery of Cingjing Veterans Farm changes throughout the four seasons. In addition, different temperate flowers and fruits are grown there as well. Visiting Cingjing Veterans Farm in different seasons, you will be highly impressed by the miracle of nature.
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:36 pm

Cingjing Veterans Farm

If there is a paradise in Taiwan, that must be the Cingjing Veterans Farm. She hides herself at the Jen-Ai Town of the Nan-Tou County in the Central Taiwan. Cingjing Farm is famous for the beautiful scenery, Sheep Shearing Show, and characteristic home-stays. Autumn is the best time to see the most graceful and romantic looks of the Cingjing Farm.

Passing native forests, through towering gorges, you can wrap yourself in the fresh air and the scenic wild greenery of the Cingjing Farm. Cingjing Farm is surrounded by notional park and hot spots. In the autumn, the best scenic spot is the Aowanda Forest Recreational Park. With the arrival of autumn, maple leaves turn red and flutter in the air, so it is acclaimed as “the home of Taiwan maple woods”. Taking a walk through the forest, you would feel that you are walking into the scenery of the romance movie, The Autumn in New York. You also can enjoy the graceful sight of Meng-Gu Waterfall and Emerald Lake.

Cingjing Farm is one of the most popular farms in Taiwan. Every weekend, the people there will hold an interesting Sheep Shearing Show. The host is Mr. Grand from New Zealand, along with the assistant, his wife Mrs. Grand, who is a Taiwanese, will bring the audience their marvelous program with the cute sheep. The show begins with the "sheep herding". Mr. Grand commands his two sheepdogs with a whistle. And impressively, the sheep will be herded into their fence by jumping in a very short time. Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience down to be the sheepherder. She/he will classify the sheep into three groups. Finally, Mr. Grand will give you his master-stroke -- the sheep shearing show. During the show, Mrs. Grand will translate for him. Their presentation is very humorous. And the innocent look and the comical posture of the sheep will definitely make you laugh!

There are many characteristic home-stays in Cingjing Farm, every home-stay vie with each other for glamour. Cloud's Hometown has the most fantastic view of all home-stays. The VIP room has three French windows, so you can appreciate the ancient forest, deep gorge, and mirror-like Emerald Lake without any blind spot. Taking a bath and look outside the window, the indistinct senses behind the fog will let you feel that you are the angel living in the “Cloud's Hometown”. Surrounded by the nature, you can totally enjoy yourself with the fusion of human and nature.


The scenery of Cingjing Veterans Farm changes throughout the four seasons. In addition, different temperate flowers and fruits are grown there as well. As long as visiting the Cingjing Veterans Farm in different seasons, you will not only highly praise the miracle of nature, but also enjoy an unforgettable vacation!
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Re: Cingjing Veterans Farm

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:36 pm

你的分詞構句都是正確的。

P2.
>Cingjing Farm is surrounded by notional park and...
--> national

P3.
>And impressively, the sheep will be herded into their fence by jumping in a very short time.

1. into their fenced enclosure(google 上較多) 或是 into their fence enclosure
2. by jumping in a very short time 這整個讀起來有些問題

--> Is it "by jumping in" : jumping INTO the enclosure? 是的話,後面的a very short time就不完整

--> Is it "by jumping / in a very short time"? 這整個會變成這些sheep are herded (into the enclosure) by jumping / within a very short time?? --> 用"跳"的這個方式把sheep趕進羊圈...

How about this--> ....the sheep will be herded into their fence enclosure in(within) a very short time.

我不太確定jumping在這裡是什麼意思,我沒有實際看過sheep herding,唯一的就是電影上的那個會趕羊的小豬"Babe",那情況是柵欄口是開的,羊群被牧羊狗(or "babe")趕進羊圈後再把柵欄口關起來。所以這個jumping是邊趕這些羊會蹦蹦跳跳的,還是這柵欄口不是完全open,而是個很低的柵欄,然後羊要用跳的才能進入?

Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience down to be the sheepherder.

invite...down : doesn't quite make sense

1. ...will invite an audience to be the sheep herder.
2. ...will invite an audience down to the spot and herd the sheep. (hm... not good. )
3. ...will invite an audience over to the spot and herd the sheep. (a bit better. 也許你可以找個字眼代替the spot)
4. ...will invite an audience to herd the sheep (較直接簡潔)

She/he will classify the sheep into three groups.
這部份只是建議,你可以保留。
classify這字眼不大好。整句意思有些不清楚。how about -->

Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience to shepherd the sheep, herding them into three groups.

P4.
homestay: 拼法很多種,一個字的在google上較多。再來是home stay。再來是home-stay。因為不是字典上的字,都可以用,所以看你自己囉:)
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:37 pm

我是覺得you(或是I)是無法避免的,畢竟是你的旅遊經驗(or讀起來像),一些關於"人"的感情描述仍是要有的...
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:37 pm

感謝各位前輩的指導
各位的指導遠比老師的還精湛非常多
我會找時間再好好改進的
再次謝謝
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:37 pm

我後來問一起去清境的朋友, 原來我看錯了, 羊不是跳進柵欄
(如果羊可以跳越柵欄, 那要柵欄幹什麼 )

區分 - divide 好像會比 分類 貼切一點

我想這一部份會照下面這樣改

And impressively, the sheep will be herded into their fenced enclosure in a very short time. Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience to be the sheep herder. She/he will divide the sheep into three groups.

再次感謝 djyang 的指導

引文:
djyang 寫道:

P3.
>And impressively, the sheep will be herded into their fence by jumping in a very short time.

1. into their fenced enclosure(google 上較多) 或是 into their fence enclosure
2. by jumping in a very short time 這整個讀起來有些問題

--> Is it "by jumping in" : jumping INTO the enclosure? 是的話,後面的a very short time就不完整

--> Is it "by jumping / in a very short time"? 這整個會變成這些sheep are herded (into the enclosure) by jumping / within a very short time?? --> 用"跳"的這個方式把sheep趕進羊圈...

How about this--> ....the sheep will be herded into their fence enclosure in(within) a very short time.

我不太確定jumping在這裡是什麼意思,我沒有實際看過sheep herding,唯一的就是電影上的那個會趕羊的小豬"Babe",那情況是柵欄口是開的,羊群被牧羊狗(or "babe")趕進羊圈後再把柵欄口關起來。所以這個jumping是邊趕這些羊會蹦蹦跳跳的,還是這柵欄口不是完全open,而是個很低的柵欄,然後羊要用跳的才能進入?

Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience down to be the sheepherder.

invite...down : doesn't quite make sense

1. ...will invite an audience to be the sheep herder.
2. ...will invite an audience down to the spot and herd the sheep. (hm... not good. )
3. ...will invite an audience over to the spot and herd the sheep. (a bit better. 也許你可以找個字眼代替the spot)
4. ...will invite an audience to herd the sheep (較直接簡潔)

She/he will classify the sheep into three groups.
這部份只是建議,你可以保留。
classify這字眼不大好。整句意思有些不清楚。how about -->

Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience to shepherd the sheep, herding them into three groups.
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 2:37 pm

If there is a paradise in Taiwan, that must be the Cingjing Veterans Farm. She hides herself at the Jen-Ai Town of the Nan-Tou County in the Central Taiwan. Cingjing Farm is famous for the beautiful scenery, Sheep Shearing Show, and characteristic home-stays. Autumn is the best time to see the most graceful and romantic looks of the Cingjing Farm.

Passing native forests, through towering gorges, you can wrap yourself in the fresh air and the scenic wild greenery of the Cingjing Farm. Cingjing Farm is surrounded by national park and hot spots. In the autumn, the best scenic spot is the Aowanda Forest Recreational Park. With the arrival of autumn, maple leaves turn red and flutter in the wind, which is honorably described as “the home of Taiwan maples”. Taking a walk through the forest, you would envision that you are experiencing scenery of a romance movie, like in the film “The Autumn in New York”. You also can enjoy the graceful sight of Meng-Gu Waterfall and Emerald Lake.

Cingjing Farm is one of the most popular farms in Taiwan. Every weekend, the people there will hold an interesting Sheep Shearing Show. The host is Mr. Grand from New Zealand, along with the assistant, his wife Mrs. Grand, who is a Taiwanese, will bring the audience their marvelous program with the cute sheep. The show begins with the "sheep herding". Mr. Grand commands his two sheepdogs with a whistle. And impressively, the sheep will be herded into their fenced enclosure in a very short time. Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience to be the sheep herder. She/he will divide the sheep into three groups. Finally, Mr. Grand will give you his master-stroke -- the sheep shearing show. During the show, Mrs. Grand will translate for him. Their presentation is very humorous. And the innocent look and the comical posture of the sheep will definitely make you laugh!

There are many characteristic home-stays in Cingjing Farm, every home-stay vie with each other for glamour. Cloud's Hometown has the most fantastic view of all home-stays. The VIP room has three French windows, so you can appreciate the ancient forest, deep gorge, and mirror-like Emerald Lake without any blind spot. Looking outside the window during a hot spring bath, the indistinct senses behind the fog will make you dream as if you were are a angel living in the “Cloud's Hometown”. Surrounded by the nature, you can totally enjoy yourself with the fusion of human and nature.
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