I often participate in activities of table game society during the period of university.which is a opportunity let me make friends from different department and become outgoing .also.during Fourth year of university.I participate in XXX that make me have got a lot of knowledge about process of international logistics and document management form supervisors of logistic.after graduation.I started striving to study english and japanese on myown.tests not only help me keep vocabulary and grammar in mind,but also improve my listening comprehension.I have long been interacting with some Americans by going to the church. With such a rare and helpful opportunity, I have a chance to reinforce speaking and communication skills. moreover. I am looking for fellows who have the target in common with me to assemble a study group on the Net to use English in practice, not just face the screen or text books
在校時經由參與桌遊社團活動,認識了很多其他科系的同學們,使我愛好人群之間的互動,且參加XXX,在大四的兩個學期裡,獲得許多物流業界先進的指導,幫助我了解國際物流的作業流程,以及相關文件的相關知識,畢業後透過網路自學英語和日語,參加檢定考試不止使我熟記單字和文法,也幫助我熟悉生活中的聽力,並在網路上尋找共同目標的同儕,相約組成讀書會,彼此之間交流外語相關,透過參加教會的活動,獲得了能和英語系國家的人,可以實際互動的難得機會,增強了外語口說的溝通能力,同時也拓展了人際溝通的能力,而不是單單只面對螢幕或書本
請問我的英文.中文錯地離譜嗎?希望能得到各位的幫助
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