A Double-sided Lover

A Double-sided Lover

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 3:13 pm

這是我的英文寫作作業
敬請各位高手多多指教
感激不盡!!!

What does the relationship with her tell me about her? Some things that I can understand and some that I may never be able to understand. I know that there are always two sides of her, really. One is moving, considerate and cultivated the possessor of a detached dignity that keeps me fascinated. The other is a girl who is just a little too hysterical, which is not moving or considerate at all, and certainly not cultivated. Both sides of her can drive me crazy.

The first side of her is so glamorous. She has stunning long straight hair that looks like a dark and liquid waterfall; sparkling eyes that can melt me as sunshine to an ice cube, not to mention her brilliant smile that can easily steal my soul. She is not too short and not too tall, but can nestle to my shoulder. She is not too weighty and not too light, but can allow me to hug her up. In addition, she will comfort me and cheer me up when I am frustrated. She can help me to pick out suitable clothes that make me have a shinning countenance. Besides, her behavior is always elegant. She will talk with a graceful tone, dress properly in any occasion. She is always neat and tidy, so I can always smell the scent from her hair, which can heal of all my sadness and all my depression. She is such an angle who can make me think of her crazily all the time.

But another side of her is not so charming. I know nobody can be positive all the time even though she is an angel. She sometimes keeps chattering endlessly when I just finished a day long of work. Meanwhile, when I have no response to her, she will say that I don’t respect her and ignore her heartlessly. However, when I try to give her some to-the-point advice, she will cry out that she doesn’t want to hear about my analyses. Also, sometimes when I need just a second of quietness and need to stay alone after having a waterloo, arguing with her for some trivial things, such as choosing the color of sofa, will drive me out of control. Moreover, when I drive with her but lost my way for a while, she will not respect my sense of direction, and ask me to consult a pedestrian, which does hurt my sense of self-respect.

To sum up, she is a very special girl to me. Some times her irresistible beauty drives me crazy as losing my mind. But otherwise, I have become a mad man for her hysteria. Finally, I understand that she may have such two contradictory feelings about me. I should try to be in her shoes when I had opportunities.
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 3:13 pm

P1.

> cultivated the possessor of a detached dignity that keeps me fascinated.

cultivated和the之間少了個逗號-> "... cultivated, the possessor ...."

(或者是對照Time的那篇HEROIC JACKIE, TACKY JACKIE)
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台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 3:13 pm

謝謝,其實我是參考那篇的寫的
不過程度還差很多很多...
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