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Topic：My life philisophy

First of all, I think that this word philisophy is very
abstract. It is not easy to understand and not to explain by languish word. I am twenty-two-year old. Sometimes I feel the life is like staff and a song graceful melody consists of high pitch and low pictch. I often ask me what
the life is pursuing? People have many stages. In time of different stages, everyone have oneself do to something.
For example, when you are a student, your position is studying.

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Topic: My Philosophy on Life

First of all, I think philosophy is a very abstract word; it is not easy to understand and not easily explained by words. As a twenty-two-year-old, I sometimes feel that life (like staff?? what do you mean?) is like a song, with the high and low pitch representing the high and low points in life. I often ask myself the question "what is the purpose of life?" People go through different stages in life, and everyone has different things to do in his own stage. For example, when you are a student, your job is to study.