[請教]英文求職自傳

[請教]英文求職自傳

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 3:19 am

由於本身 英文程度不好,這是自己寫的,希望前輩能不吝幫我指證,修改,謝謝!!

My name is XXX,I was born in Taichung. There are four members in my family.My father and mother are engaged in the preschool industry. I have a younger brother who attends the high school.

Now I am studying in National Kaohsiung Hospitality College majoring in Hospitality Marketing Management.In school I learned some computer software programs, including Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Photoimpact, Frontpage, Outlook. I’m good at dealing with documents. In addition, I can integrate those programs and improve my productivity.

Abundant association experiences expanded my interpersonal relationships. It made me easier to interact with others.Because my friendly, classmates elected me as the class leader. I learned both coordination, cooperation, and resposibility. Now I can serve people well.

I also participated in the actively.It made me not only realizes the common goal and good communication in a team have great influence on working achievement but also studied to have a good interaction with each other.

I strived to get certificates of skill, in addition to attending the Business English course in order to strengthen my ability of English during the school days.
I accumulated work experiences by working part-time let me train oneself from it and should be to the method advancing and retreat in the face of the demands of different guests.

It is the faith convincing me that everything is affected by the attitude. In the future, I will face challenges, overcome difficulties, and solve problems in positive and aggressive manners. I will appreciate the chance given to cooperate with you for your company.
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Re: [請教]英文求職自傳

台灣英語網1.0 » 週五 8月 21, 2015 3:19 am

My name is XXX, __and__ I was born in Taichung. There are four members in my family.(空格要注意,不要擠在一起) My father and mother are engaged in the preschool industry__, and my younger brother is a high school student.__

Now I am studying in National Kaohsiung Hospitality College majoring in Hospitality Marketing Management.(空格要注意,不要擠在一起) In school I learned some computer software programs, including Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Photoimpact, Frontpage, __and__ Outlook. I’m good at dealing with documents. In addition, I can integrate those programs and improve my productivity.

Abundant association experiences expanded my interpersonal relationships(???). It made me easier to interact with others.(空格要注意,不要擠在一起) Because my friendly(my + 名詞), __my__ classmates elected me as the class leader. I learned both(both只有兩樣) coordination, cooperation, and resposibility. Now I can serve people well.
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