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Re: [英文寫作]Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet
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Dear GP,

In essay writing, a 'topic sentence', the first sentence in a paragraph, or a 'position statement' or 'theme', the last sentence in an intro can sometimes be troblesome to us.

What these terms mean is that we need to tell our readers CLEARLY and SPECIFICALLY what our feelings or opinions are on an issue. But then what a clear and specific opinion is, you may ask.

Here is the last sentence from your revised intro:

"Thus we should know what kinds of threat and benefit it brings us to put the Internet to good use in our life."

And here is mine:

"Weighing their needs and the technology's features, they [users] will find the Internet has more advantages than disadvanges."

I agree both setences state a viewpoint, but there is a difference between them, in terms of the intention of making such a statement.

Can you tell?

AskChi

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Re: hardly surprising
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hardly surprising或者可以說"沒什麽值得驚訝的""很平常/常有的"

2008/01/23 06:43
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Is their head big? or Are their heads big?
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請問到底是 Is their head big? or Are their heads big?
Is their nose big? or Are their noses big?
參考書讓我蠻困惑ㄉ,感謝各位ㄉ答覆囉!

2008/01/23 05:58
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Re: 請問〞中文配音〞怎麼說呢?
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(The movie was) dubbed into Mandarin (Chinese).

dub v.

Thank you,

2008/01/23 05:17

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請問〞中文配音〞怎麼說呢?
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中文配音=mandarin dobbing?
謝謝答覆

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Re: 你會的我也會,我會的你會了嗎?
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i know what you know? do you get what i get?

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Re: 翹課在唱片行閒逛=>怎麼翻
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i think the best way to say is that "i ditched the class and went to campact disc store yesterday. "

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Re: "平時成績"
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first of all, i don't think GPA means the one he is asking, grade point average in american gihh school means the average of grade points you get from the whole claases you took during the school time. the one he asks can said that it is your grade. that's all.

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Re: "平時成績"
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簡單的一個字: grade 就好了! ~~

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Re: [英文寫作]Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet
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引文:

askchi 寫道:
Like your intro, mine has a 'funnel' structure, going from general information to specific details. Unlike yours, though, mine has a 'position statement' at the end of the paragraph, which tells readers exactly what my position is on the issue being addressed. It is this posistion statement or theme and the points you develop in the furthcoming paragraphs at which your reader can agree or disagree with you.

嗯∼的確,我試著在第一段最後加上一句話,看看這樣子的感覺是否會比較好一點。
(修改後的文章會直接在#2重新編輯)
一樣再麻煩版上的各位抽個空給予批評指教了!

2008/01/22 19:14



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