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英文履歷與自傳
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請教一下
我即將要去面試的公司回了這段英文
In your autobiography, please address how you will develop a new market, as a sales.
所以我想要凸顯這方面但是不太會表達,
希望我在自傳中提到有關新產品行銷的看法,我的英文能力不是很好
於是我寫下這不是很通順的自傳還請多多指教 修改謝謝


Autobiography
  My name Willy. i am 28 years old, now am refresher course from SOOCHOW UNIVERSITY and major in business administration. There are five people in my family. My father works in a company. it is about Chinesemedicine and westmedicine. And my mother is a housewife. In my spare time, I like to play basketball. and i like go autside enjoy the naturism, and take some beautiful pictureI . i also like surf on the internet to Increases my technical new knowledge.

Once held the post in the Apple Computer dealer sells engineer, sold the Apple correlation the soft hardware, might has the help with the soft hardware foundation service in the future company and the work Looked by company's marketing new product that, the electronic products should be must increase the product the sensitometry, very much participates in the international level the electron to unfold for example Germany's Cebit display to promote the European market greatly, to local marketing circuit 11 understood, when will in the future make the sale only then knew which way will be supposed to use to enable the product the massive sales, Taiwan's market and Europe will be dissimilar after all, in the cultural difference will select and purchase when the consumer also will have the very big difference, thorough will visit, will be starting to sell can certainly obtain the European locality the consumer affection.

Since the product certainly also locks for electronic products expense tribal grouping tribal group this in the computer network user, may penetrate the network to make the marketing, for example provides the test experience the product in the forum website to write the similar share the article, attracts the consumer.

2007/07/20 21:13

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Re: 英文履歷與自傳
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Willy,

先把你的句子分清楚,盡量試試看。一個句子只能有一個動詞,除非有連接詞或關係詞。
你的文章第二段和第三段有多處意義不清楚,需要有簡易的中文說明,對想幫忙的會員會比較方便。

下面是一些有疑問例子:

refresher course
Apple correlation (Apple Corporation?)
soft hardware
soft hardware foundation service
sensitometry
the international level the electron to unfold
tribal grouping tribal group

2007/07/21 00:16

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Re: 英文履歷與自傳
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以公司 行銷新產品來看,電子產品應該就是要增加產品的曝光度,多多參加國際級的電子大展例如德國的Cebit展覽以推廣歐洲市場,對當地的行銷通路一一的去了解,日後在做銷售時才知道應該使用哪種方式來使得產品能大量的銷售,畢竟台灣的市場和歐洲是不一樣的,文化上的差異在消費者選購時也有很大的不同,徹底的去訪問,在開始銷售一定會獲得歐洲當地的消費者喜愛。
既然產品為電子產品消費族群這當然也鎖定在電腦網路的使用者,可以透過網路做行銷,例如將產品在論壇網站上提供試用者體驗,寫出類似分享的文章以吸引消費者。

2007/07/21 17:44

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