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2006/01/15
分類: 文法篇 : 

作者: webberhan (5:00 pm)
【戰勝英文寫作 】

郭岱宗著
東華書局 出版

沒有浮誇封面, 只有曖曖內含光
沒有長篇大論, 只有一針見血

作者不斷地採用優劣兩種範例來說明各種寫作技巧
先展示一篇拙劣中式作文,直言指出缺點
再展示一篇優美的作文,指出優點,再加以比較
下面的例子節錄自第五頁

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例一:
我去他的印象十分深刻,因為他從來不遲到。我相信這個好行為將是他成功的因素。
同學不能寫出以下的英文句子:
I am very impressed with him because he is never late. I ivelieve this good behavior will be the reason why he will succeed.
缺點:
1. 真正的主詞失蹤。主詞不是「我」,而是他的「行為」,未能抓穩全句精簡的結構。一般而言,若主詞不夠明確,全句將會流於鬆散,亳無重心可言。
2. 句子冗長、累贅,浪費文章寶貴的篇幅。
3. vocabulary 太幼稚,難登英文作之堂。

同學可參考以下英文:
His impressive punctuality ahsll lead him to success.
一句話就可完整而細膩地表遠
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當局者迷, 寫了那麼多中式英文, 直到看到這本書才清楚什麼是中式英文。這本書就像照妖鏡, 反映出中國人英文寫作的缺點。這本書也是一張藏寶圖,帶領我們走向高水準的英文寫作。



【朗文名人演講精選&技巧解析】
馮景照、蔡宇茗 編著
林錦和、馮景照、蔡宇茗 翻譯
吳國賢 錄音
各種語言都一樣,模仿是學習的寫作的途徑之一。言簡意賅的名人演講是最佳的模仿對象之一。在欣賞精采文章的同時,如果有人幫忙賞析,更是事半功倍。這本書收錄的文章很多,美中不足之處是技巧解析的部份,我個人覺得有點少。應該是我程度太低,需要解析的部份比較多吧。

【英文寫作修飾手冊】
黑片裕一 著; 戴偉傑 譯
對於寫作新手來說,應該蠻有幫助的。有些學了很久的文法、片語,還是不知道怎麼用。這本書就是從寫作的角度做一些指引。

【讀寫快易通】
旋元佑
這本書對我最幫助的事是,讓我知道天有多高、快有多厚。只能感嘆「仰之彌高,鑽之彌堅,瞻之在前,忽焉在後」。我唯一有點意見的是書名的「快易通」三個字,對於我這種凡夫俗子來說,根本無法對這本書又快又易的通。這個書名應該又是某個喜歡欺世盜名的出版商出的鬼主意吧?!

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需要寫三份作業,有外國老師幫你改作業
算是可以練習到英文寫作

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2005/12/16
分類: 文法篇 : 

作者: webberhan (4:20 pm)
If there is a paradise in Taiwan, that must be the Cingjing Veterans Farm. She hides herself at the Jen-Ai Town of the Nan-Tou County in the Central Taiwan. Cingjing Farm is famous for the beautiful scenery, Sheep Shearing Show, and characteristic home-stays. Autumn is the best time to see the most graceful and romantic looks of the Cingjing Farm.

Passing native forests, through towering gorges, you can wrap yourself in the fresh air and the scenic wild greenery of the Cingjing Farm. Cingjing Farm is surrounded by notional park and hot spots. In the autumn, the best scenic spot is the Aowanda Forest Recreational Park. With the arrival of autumn, maple leaves turn red and flutter in the air, so it is acclaimed as “the home of Taiwan maple woods”. Taking a walk through the forest, you would feel that you are walking into the scenery of the romance movie, The Autumn in New York. You also can enjoy the graceful sight of Meng-Gu Waterfall and Emerald Lake.

Cingjing Farm is one of the most popular farms in Taiwan. Every weekend, the people there will hold an interesting Sheep Shearing Show. The host is Mr. Grand from New Zealand, along with the assistant, his wife Mrs. Grand, who is a Taiwanese, will bring the audience their marvelous program with the cute sheep. The show begins with the "sheep herding". Mr. Grand commands his two sheepdogs with a whistle. And impressively, the sheep will be herded into their fence by jumping in a very short time. Next, Mr. Grand will invite an audience down to be the sheepherder. She/he will classify the sheep into three groups. Finally, Mr. Grand will give you his master-stroke -- the sheep shearing show. During the show, Mrs. Grand will translate for him. Their presentation is very humorous. And the innocent look and the comical posture of the sheep will definitely make you laugh!

There are many characteristic home-stays in Cingjing Farm, every home-stay vie with each other for glamour. Cloud's Hometown has the most fantastic view of all home-stays. The VIP room has three French windows, so you can appreciate the ancient forest, deep gorge, and mirror-like Emerald Lake without any blind spot. Taking a bath and look outside the window, the indistinct senses behind the fog will let you feel that you are the angel living in the “Cloud's Hometown”. Surrounded by the nature, you can totally enjoy yourself with the fusion of human and nature.


The scenery of Cingjing Veterans Farm changes throughout the four seasons. In addition, different temperate flowers and fruits are grown there as well. As long as visiting the Cingjing Veterans Farm in different seasons, you will not only highly praise the miracle of nature, but also enjoy an unforgettable vacation!

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